The
website for Gates N Fences has a number of problems that make it very difficult
for visitors. First, the site is extremely busy, there is too much content on
one page. The text is very small and
there is quite a lot of it. It is an
immediate turn off as it would be difficult to find what a visitor is looking
for on this page. Going down the left side are a number of links, opening other
pages that are equally busy and difficult to read. The page itself is not esthetically pleasing.
Finally, even the main introduction/title to
the page is not grammatically correct, with various words capitalized. This page should be re-written extensively,
with less text and larger type. The page
should focus on just a few main products with links to additional information if
needed.
This
website also has some significant problems.
First, even after reviewing it, it is very difficult to tell what the
site is even for. The site is very busy
and not reader friendly. One of the
first things I see is the note that a plug in was vulnerable and needs to be
updated. There are also a number of
other ads that are confusing. The page
as a whole is difficult to read and I would be afraid to click on many of the
links. This page should be updated to
focus on a clear goal or product, with far less links. Any plug-ins should be eliminated and all
other media should be checked to make sure it works.
https://artcenter.org/
I liked
the site of California Center for the Arts as it was clear and easy to read. At
the very top is a clear brand to know what site I was visiting. It had some nice
links to calendar and upcoming events.
The site did a good use of icons, in addition to labels, for its links
which made it easy to navigate. Where
there is text, the text was good size, readable, and spaced so it was not
difficult to read.
Finally,
the site for Apple is well done as well.
The site is bright and colorful with great photos showing all the
products. The text in the site is clear,
good size and includes bolded headings, making it easy to read. A brief glance at the page shows the various
products that are available, with some specific “sound bites” of information
for each product. A visitor could then
drill down on what they wanted to peruse and link to either a page with more information
or the ability to purchase on site.
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